My oral presentation

The video: MY SUMMER HOLIDAYS




The writing: My summer holidays.

Hello! My name is Carlota and now I'm going to talk about my summer holidays. First I'm going to talk about my trip in Poole with my new friends. Second the cruise in the Mediterranean and finally la about Molina. In Poole I stayed with a great family in. Every morning I got up at 6:30 because I had to stay at the bus stop at 8 o'clock. I had English lessons every day except Saturday and Sunday. After the lessons we went to a fantastic place to play or swim. I made a lot of new friends in Poole and we enjoyed a lot our time together.

After Poole I went to a magnificent Cruise in the Mediterranean. The Cruise was very big and there was a lot of things to do in it. We visited a lot of places like La Toscana, Rome and others. Finally la Molina. In la Molina you can ski but in the summer you can make long excursions. I met my best friends in la Molina, Blanca and Nora. I enjoyed a lot my summer holidays.

Thank you for listening!

 My observation: 

- Did you use any resources? I use a power point

- Were the resources relevant and attractive? Not a lot it hasn't got any photos and there were some spelling mistakes

 -Did you look at your audience most of the time? Yes i did

- Did you read from your notes? Not a lot

- Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience? Sometimes

Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? I followed the order of my holidays

- Did you use discourse markers to to make your ideas more clear? Yes I did

-Did you introduce interesting NEW information to your audience? No I didn't

- Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the internet, books..? No I didn't

-Was your information more superficial or more detailed,and original? It was detailed and original

- Did you check your grammar?(verbs, word order)Yes, I check and i selcet my vocabulary

- Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary? No I didn't

(synonyms, new words, expressions..)

- Did you use sentence linkers?(and, but, moreover, also, furthermore, although,however..) I use but and and.

- Did you use  fillers?(well, you know, for example, one second..) I use "like"

 -Did you know how to pronounce all your words? Yes, I did

- Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher? No, I did this with my brother

- Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time?Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions? No, I think all the time i had the same vioce and this it was good.

What mark did you get?
I think I get an 7 because the power point it wasn't great and I had a break when I was explane about the cruise but the pronunciation it was good and I did't go very fast

The power point:

Presentacio diapositiva

My classmates:


Gerard: Firts he goes to Cadiz, second Sancular and finally he came back to Banyolas
Laura: She visited Can Toni gros and Tossa
Bernat D: He wen to Cant Toni, second Plantja D'Aro and finally he came back to Banyolas
Laia: She went to a Summer camp, l'Estartit and Banyolas
Enric: He went to Praga Berga and finally he return to Banyolas
Marta: She went to England, Almeria, Platja D'Aro , Calonje and Dublin
Paula: She stay in Tarragona
Pau: He went to Platja D'Aro, Tossa and then he came back to Banyolas
Marta T: She went toshe's grandparents hose, Caldea (Andorra) ans she's aunt house
Mireia N: Firts she went to Berlin, secon Polee and finally Platja D'Aro
Mireia F: She wents to Andorra for 3 days, l'Estartit for 4 days and Bayolas for the rest of the summer.
Núria: She wents to Cantoni for 1 week, England for 3 weeks and Coata Azul for 5 days
Júlia: Firts the cruise, second l'Estarit and finally Juanetes
Pol: He went to Platja D'Aro and then he came back to Banyolas
Esther: First Albera, second Granada, and Finally she came back
Elena: She went to Germany, Poole, Kenya and Zanzibar
Bernat R: First he stay in Banyolas, second he saty in Tarragona nd finaly he return to Banyolas
Monica: She went to a caping in Berga, then she went to l'Escala and finally she came back to Banyolas
Jordi: He went to Berlind and then he came back to prepared for school